Why do we need to learn how to swim?
William and Nela
Topic sentence:
Swimming is a skill we should all learn.
Supporting sentence:
While your at the beach things can happen superfast you could get lonely and the tide can push you out to deep water and without swimming lessons, you can maybe drown and die.
Closing sentence:
Overall swimming is very vital and this is why I believe we all as Gi need to know how to swim.
1 comments:
Hey William,
You are right, everybody needs to learn how to swim. I really enjoyed reading the Supporting sentence.Next time you should show a video of you teaching us how to swim.
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